Tag: Caroline

  • Missing Person

    Written in white chalk by the door was a notice that read, Missing person! Inquire within. “This the place?” Caroline asked. “Yes. It’s just how I remember it,” Isamura said. “Well, we don’t all need to go in,” Caroline said, peering in the window and thinking that it would get rather crowded if they all […]

  • 13 months later

    As the security detail reluctantly turned over their weapons, the rest of the team advanced into the town itself. There were no people on the main street, but from several windows frightened faces could be seen peering out at the outsiders. “It is not us they are fearful of,” Isamura told the others as they […]

  • Even more minor changes

    So there were a few things that didn’t feel right about the draft of Flight of Passion.  Isamura just had too many answers at the briefing, and I don’t think she should know everything.  So now instead she knows someone who deals in the kind of crystal that they need.  But there are no particular […]

  • Update

    I’ve made a little progress. In the original draft, Isamura asked Caroline when she’s going to get some flying lessons.  It didn’t exactly work very well.  Now they have a much more interesting dialogue (regarding Erica) with parts of the original draft worked in subtly.  I haven’t got any further than that, with the new […]

  • Flight of Passion

    So I’m now up to just over 4000 words on this chapter which I’m calling ‘Flight of Passion’ for the moment. It’s working out quite well, but it also throws a bit of a spanner in the works.  Maybe the working title will give you a clue as to why that is the case.  Anyway […]