Martin Burne's Brain Storm

Tag: Erica

  • Missing Person

    Written in white chalk by the door was a notice that read, Missing person! Inquire within. “This the place?” Caroline asked. “Yes. It’s just how I remember it,” Isamura said. “Well, we don’t all need to go in,” Caroline said, peering in the window and thinking that it would get rather crowded if they all…

  • Update

    I’ve made a little progress. In the original draft, Isamura asked Caroline when she’s going to get some flying lessons.  It didn’t exactly work very well.  Now they have a much more interesting dialogue (regarding Erica) with parts of the original draft worked in subtly.  I haven’t got any further than that, with the new…