I’m starting a new part that picks up after the big revelation in Part 12. I think the fight scene needs a bit of work. But I can come back to that.
I’m in the final stretch for this chapter (Flight of Passion is Chapter 9 on my outline for the book) and when I’m done I can start editing it, backfilling the previous chapters, and so on.
Hopefully when the book is more complete and doesn’t look like a half-finished Death Star built by the cheapest bidder I’ll be able to get a bit more feedback on it.