Martin Burne's Brain Storm

Update

I’ve made a little progress. In the original draft, Isamura asked Caroline when she’s going to get some flying lessons. It didn’t exactly work very well. Now they have a much more interesting dialogue (regarding Erica) with parts of the original draft worked in subtly. I haven’t got any further than that, with the new […]

September 29, 2010
Some little changes

So, I have got quite far into my new draft of Flight of Passion, and I’ve made some changes to the site as a result. You should see a couple of new menus over on the right. Crew pages leads you to the Crew of the Orion page, and not a lot else. This is […]

August 31, 2010
Flight of Passion

So I’m now up to just over 4000 words on this chapter which I’m calling ‘Flight of Passion’ for the moment. It’s working out quite well, but it also throws a bit of a spanner in the works. Maybe the working title will give you a clue as to why that is the case. Anyway […]

November 30, 2009
Update on the new chapter

Since I posted that excerpt, I’ve managed to write the fight scene that comes after. Twice. The first draft took about a page and afterwards I thought that if that was it, why bother splitting up at all? So I wrote a second draft which is paced a bit better, two pages. Since I’m currently […]

May 29, 2009
Chapter 8

I have been a little remiss in continuing the writing momentum.

November 12, 2008