Martin Burne's Brain Storm

Category: Nexus

  • Progress at last

    I made a little more progress last night, getting as far as the team entering the town, so I have updated. Enjoy!

  • Even more minor changes

    So there were a few things that didn’t feel right about the draft of Flight of Passion.  Isamura just had too many answers at the briefing, and I don’t think she should know everything.  So now instead she knows someone who deals in the kind of crystal that they need.  But there are no particular…

  • Something new

    I made a little headway the past couple of nights with my trusty pencil and pad.  It’s still a little rough so I’m not going to update yet, but at least I have something new.

  • Update

    I’ve made a little progress. In the original draft, Isamura asked Caroline when she’s going to get some flying lessons.  It didn’t exactly work very well.  Now they have a much more interesting dialogue (regarding Erica) with parts of the original draft worked in subtly.  I haven’t got any further than that, with the new…

  • Some little changes

    So, I have got quite far into my new draft of Flight of Passion, and I’ve made some changes to the site as a result.  You should see a couple of new menus over on the right. Crew pages leads you to the Crew of the Orion page, and not a lot else.  This is…

  • Flight of Passion

    So I’m now up to just over 4000 words on this chapter which I’m calling ‘Flight of Passion’ for the moment. It’s working out quite well, but it also throws a bit of a spanner in the works.  Maybe the working title will give you a clue as to why that is the case.  Anyway…

  • Update on the new chapter

    Since I posted that excerpt, I’ve managed to write the fight scene that comes after. Twice. The first draft took about a page and afterwards I thought that if that was it, why bother splitting up at all? So I wrote a second draft which is paced a bit better, two pages. Since I’m currently…

  • Chapter 8

    I have been a little remiss in continuing the writing momentum.