Category: Servant of the Siphen

  • Ideas and stuff

    I’ve decided that I’m going to keep a page of ideas handy on the site, saves me minimising and using the desktop shortcut like some kind of a caveman. I added a few things today, so I think I have what I need to keep writing. Fingers crossed. I’ve added a link over on the…

  • Updated

    The latest part of Flight of Passion which was previously posted on LiveJournal has been added to the site here.  Sorry for the delay. I’ve also broken it down into episodes for easier reading.

  • Update on Flight of Passion

    So the last post I made, the team had split up to look for the missing adventurer. I’ve written some more so go check it out here! There are also a few subtle changes earlier in the chapter for consistency with regards to Tegan and Erica. What I don’t have yet is some sort of…

  • Missing Person

    Written in white chalk by the door was a notice that read, Missing person! Inquire within. “This the place?” Caroline asked. “Yes. It’s just how I remember it,” Isamura said. “Well, we don’t all need to go in,” Caroline said, peering in the window and thinking that it would get rather crowded if they all…

  • 13 months later

    As the security detail reluctantly turned over their weapons, the rest of the team advanced into the town itself. There were no people on the main street, but from several windows frightened faces could be seen peering out at the outsiders. “It is not us they are fearful of,” Isamura told the others as they…

  • Progress at last

    I made a little more progress last night, getting as far as the team entering the town, so I have updated. Enjoy!

  • Even more minor changes

    So there were a few things that didn’t feel right about the draft of Flight of Passion.  Isamura just had too many answers at the briefing, and I don’t think she should know everything.  So now instead she knows someone who deals in the kind of crystal that they need.  But there are no particular…

  • Something new

    I made a little headway the past couple of nights with my trusty pencil and pad.  It’s still a little rough so I’m not going to update yet, but at least I have something new.

  • Update

    I’ve made a little progress. In the original draft, Isamura asked Caroline when she’s going to get some flying lessons.  It didn’t exactly work very well.  Now they have a much more interesting dialogue (regarding Erica) with parts of the original draft worked in subtly.  I haven’t got any further than that, with the new…